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September 17, 2008
This session, we had two fabulous speakers that reflect two different
levels of training in Toastmasters: advanced and beginner.
Ellen Bradshaw started out the evening with her speech, “The
Brave Little Tailor.” Having been a
member of Toastmasters for two years, Ellen had already completed her first
manual of speeches from the organization and was working on an advanced project
that focused on folk tale telling. For
her project, she recounted the Grimm brother’s story of a smalltime tailor who
outsmarted two giants and a King and became King. As noted by her evaluator, James Scarborough,
she did an excellent job of setting a “mood” of adventure and engaging the
audience with her gestures and character voices. James felt that her speech could have been
improved, however, in a few ways. First,
he would have liked to see a lower reliance on notes so that she appeared more
confident and comfortable with her story.
Second, he would have liked to see books or pictures to accompany the
tale so that it became even more vivid in his imagination.
Tammie Kheocha-on rounded out our speakers with her
icebreaker speech. A recent addition to
the GWU Toastmasters club, Tammie noted how she was eager to pick up speaking
skills and apply them in her work and personal life. A senior at GW, Tammie realized that she
needed to work on skills including the ability to cater to difference
audiences, the appearance of confidence by getting rid of inarticulates like “um”
and “ah”, and the act of being concise and memorable. Christine Hanson Clapp, a veteran public
speaker, evaluated Tammie and was amazed about how well she organization her
speech. In addition, she noted that
Tammie’s smile and eye contact demonstrated confidence. A few areas where Christine felt Tammie could
have improved were her introduction and her stance. Christine felt that her introduction was not
as straightforward as it could have been and that she was leaning forward on
the podium too much.
Our Table Topics session was a time for audience members to practice their impromptu speaking. Luckily, we had some volunteers to answer tv-related questions. A special thanks go out to Stephen Richter, Christine Hanson-Clapp, Alexis Horn, Allie, and James Scarborough who answered questions. It was great to hear about their respective topics: Stephen's fascination with the gameshow Jeopardy because of it's multifaceted, jack of all trades standpoint; Christine's insight into the typical day of a Mom; Alexis's entertainment by Japanese game shows; Allie's characterizing of her apartment building akin to Melrose Place; and James' feeling about some unintelligable tv shows.
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